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LTR; Laid To Rest

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Post by awfarrow Fri Nov 26, 2010 6:06 am

Laid To Rest
Back Story:
Spoiler:


Screen Shots:
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Staff and Jobs:
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Post by IceDragon Fri Nov 26, 2010 7:26 am

I like the poem in your siggy.
Anyway, this has a rather classical, hero saves loved ones feeling to it.
I have nothing against it, but if your gonna go with it, Make It Memorably.
Some more info would be nice too.
Like a short Bio on Leyleyo, something about the time frame and probably some more characters.

There is no rush so take your time to work that up.
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Post by awfarrow Sat Nov 27, 2010 8:35 pm

thanks for both as for the story that is only the backstory there is more to it than it first may seem and i will add the character list tommorow or monday which will list detailed info on all the main characters in the story Smile
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Post by awfarrow Tue Nov 30, 2010 3:47 am

BUMP Smile
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Post by IceDragon Wed Dec 01, 2010 6:30 am

Spoilers!
*Remove the '-'*
[-spoiler]
[-/spoiler]
Use these, and separate the headers.
So its like,
Spoiler:

Also, there are missing punctuations.
Try reading, and when you reach a point where you think it should break (So you can breath), add a comma.
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Post by awfarrow Wed Dec 01, 2010 3:38 pm

Edited now it should be a more clean cut Razz
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Post by Kazzador Wed Dec 01, 2010 8:04 pm

Yeah looking better Wink
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Post by awfarrow Thu Dec 02, 2010 12:13 am

Smile Lucky I created a copy of the project I had two scripts Colliding I deleted both yet there was still an error That could've been the end of the Project Kazzador can you Make Kaduki Sprites.
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Post by Kazzador Thu Dec 02, 2010 4:41 am

I can make most types of sprites if I set my mind to it. But as I have mentioned else where I am only focusing on VS spriting at the moment I am afraid.
I however will most likely publish the VS sprites here in this site at a later date.
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Post by awfarrow Thu Dec 02, 2010 4:42 am

Oh Well that's understandable Smile Besides Im going to work on my own project about Kingdom Hearts I only need some Potraits and I can get to work Smile

Aswell as this one I must add.
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