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LTR; Laid To Rest

Post by awfarrow on Fri Nov 26, 2010 6:06 am

Laid To Rest
Back Story:
Spoiler:

In a Climate of Justice and Poverty a recent government has caused the king to think about invading his fellow countries for wealth and control in the midst of what is known as The Holy Wars is our hero a man called Leyleyo who finds thosse dearest to him have been captured and he begins his epic quest to save his loved ones.

The Average Storyline is Based After a Great war called the Vulkar War which had two sides fighting against each other, on one side the Relian Empire and on the Other the Grey Hounds who where vicious Barbarians who slaughter and pillaged a lot of Local land, the Relian empire decided to end their Tyranny but it ended up Being a War which lasted 2 Years.


Screen Shots:
Spoiler:

1:

2:


More Coming Soon-Ish





Staff and Jobs:
Spoiler:
Graphic Designers: Need 2
Lead Script developers: Need 1
Map Designs: Need 2
Weapon Designers: Need 2








Spoiler:
Name: Leyleyo Schwart
Occupation: Main Character
Class: Knight
Bio: Once a Great Commander in The kings army, mainly decided to quit his career because he Couldn't handle the deaths of so many good men.

Once when he was serving in the Vulkar Wars he had a vision from the great god Iris, telling him a great problem will occur which he can't stop but a Loss so dear to his heart will one day haunt him forever.

He Persisted not to Endure the nonsense he had seen and completely forgot about it.
Face Art:



Name: Vash Stalinburg
Occupation: Guest Character (NPC)
Class: Commander
Bio: Known Throughout as A Hero of The Vulkar Wars, he Led an assault into the camp of the Greyhounds; Came out alive and captured 5 Of the enemy Bases.
Face Art:

NOTE: Adding More Smile



Features:
[spoiler]-Customizable Game Volume and Window Colour
-Animated Boss Fights
-Mini Map (HUD)
-Optional Characters and Quests
And Many More!
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Re: LTR; Laid To Rest

Post by IceDragon on Fri Nov 26, 2010 7:26 am

I like the poem in your siggy.
Anyway, this has a rather classical, hero saves loved ones feeling to it.
I have nothing against it, but if your gonna go with it, Make It Memorably.
Some more info would be nice too.
Like a short Bio on Leyleyo, something about the time frame and probably some more characters.

There is no rush so take your time to work that up.
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Re: LTR; Laid To Rest

Post by awfarrow on Sat Nov 27, 2010 8:35 pm

thanks for both as for the story that is only the backstory there is more to it than it first may seem and i will add the character list tommorow or monday which will list detailed info on all the main characters in the story Smile
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Re: LTR; Laid To Rest

Post by awfarrow on Tue Nov 30, 2010 3:47 am

BUMP Smile
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Re: LTR; Laid To Rest

Post by IceDragon on Wed Dec 01, 2010 6:30 am

Spoilers!
*Remove the '-'*
[-spoiler]
[-/spoiler]
Use these, and separate the headers.
So its like,
Spoiler:

Introduction
*spoiler*

World
*Spoiler*

Characters
*spoiler*

Also, there are missing punctuations.
Try reading, and when you reach a point where you think it should break (So you can breath), add a comma.
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Re: LTR; Laid To Rest

Post by awfarrow on Wed Dec 01, 2010 3:38 pm

Edited now it should be a more clean cut Razz
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Re: LTR; Laid To Rest

Post by Kazzador on Wed Dec 01, 2010 8:04 pm

Yeah looking better Wink
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Re: LTR; Laid To Rest

Post by awfarrow on Thu Dec 02, 2010 12:13 am

Smile Lucky I created a copy of the project I had two scripts Colliding I deleted both yet there was still an error That could've been the end of the Project Kazzador can you Make Kaduki Sprites.
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Re: LTR; Laid To Rest

Post by Kazzador on Thu Dec 02, 2010 4:41 am

I can make most types of sprites if I set my mind to it. But as I have mentioned else where I am only focusing on VS spriting at the moment I am afraid.
I however will most likely publish the VS sprites here in this site at a later date.
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Re: LTR; Laid To Rest

Post by awfarrow on Thu Dec 02, 2010 4:42 am

Oh Well that's understandable Smile Besides Im going to work on my own project about Kingdom Hearts I only need some Potraits and I can get to work Smile

Aswell as this one I must add.
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